The presentation was “World’s slimmest smart phones“. I found these things wrong with the presentation.
– Boring and overuse of text
– Poor background theme
– Text Doesn’t stand out
All of these things taken in I feel like this is a mediocre presentation. To create an above average presentation you need to bring the following things together in harmony: Use of images, Use of Text, Perfect length, Amount of text to a slide and most of all the process of presenting. If all of these come together then your presentation could be extraordinary.